The sky is as blue as bright blue food colouring, smooth white clouds float in the sky. The white clouds are huge and tiny. I believe that the clouds in the sky are dead peoples drawings. Some clouds are just scribbles and some are dinosaur shaped clouds.
Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, October 12, 2020
Quick Write: The Crazy Plane Ride
The sky is as blue as bright blue food colouring, smooth white clouds float in the sky. The white clouds are huge and tiny. I believe that the clouds in the sky are dead peoples drawings. Some clouds are just scribbles and some are dinosaur shaped clouds.
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Kia ora Ava, I can imagine exactly what you have described. You have provided lots of detail in your creative writing. Awesome work.
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