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Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, September 2, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you doing some science. The pictures are very eye catching and I enjoyed reading the classification of the different types of planets. Did you know that Saturn is really light and could float in a massive ocean of water (if there was one big enough).
Something to think about in the future would be to put your images and facts into some sort of presentation. Perhaps you could use google slides, canva or biteable.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader
Thanks for your feedback!
DeleteHi Ava, Gosh I was really impressed with the amount of work you have put on your blog. I loved the pictures you put up of the planets Mercury is so colourful isn't it? I love looking at the night sky I find it quite fascinating the milky way the teapot just to mention a couple. The night sky is amazing down in the Mackenzie country. Keep up the fabulous work your doing Ava.
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Thanks Ali!
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