We had to write a story about a picture and then we had 7 minutes to complete it and 2 minutes to edit it and make sure the spelling was correct. (All mine was.) Here is my story. Enjoy!
As I hitch up my shorts I thump off the ramp and have to stop myself from falling off my skateboard. I roll as fast as my skateboard can take me down, down, down the 20m drop. I almost fell off but thankfully I saved myself… So here’s what happened… I accidentally rolled off the ramp, I got to the ground. I then jumped like I reversed silly samoned. Now there’s not a scratch in sight. Although there are kids all around me falling over and scraping their legs and arms. I tried again and I managed to kick-flip on the way down. Someone asked me if I wanted to join the world cup. "Yes of course!" I splutter. "Good see you on Friday, at 3.00pm. Bye." And with that he walked away.
Hi Ava I really like your story and I like all the punctuation that you used.It really painted a picture in my head.are You happy with how it turned out? Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Samara, than you for commenting on my skateboarding post. I am happy with how it turns out
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