Mischievous
Dark, red, bold and spikey
She had large blood red eyes
Her breath smelt like smoke and fresh blood
Moving as fast as a full tank of gas
Going 100km per hour
Feels like a cold hand
Slowly making way to your neck
Carries a medal, half joy half fear
Mischievous’s voice is low and frightening
She says “Oooh,I can see you."
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i love comodo dragons i learnt all about them when i was your age and i cant see any mistakes so niice goob.
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