Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, September 22, 2020
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi ava, i like your vocabulary, but in your last sentence you change from past to present??????
ReplyDeleteHi Ava
ReplyDeleteI like your story and your description
Next time you could add a photo cause it sometimes helps hook the reader in
But apart from that I think that your story is really cool :)
Thank You Kirsten, I've added a picture now.
Deletegood job ave maybe pot pull stop
ReplyDeleteI like it it gives me pirate vibes
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