Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, May 4, 2020
Poem about Kaeden
Your kind and caring , thoughtful, generous and sweet!
Even though we sometimes have disagreements I still know your the best brother!!
Your jokes are very funny!!
Thank you for being the best brother EVER ❤️❤️
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Kia Ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteWell done on the poem! Thats a very cool way to say something nice about your brother. I'm sure Kaeden loves this.
Hi Ava, what a great poem about Kaeden. Has he seen it? It sounds like he is a great brother. I think all siblings have disagreements! If you want to improve your poem, I would suggest looking again at 'your'. I wonder if you are meaning to say 'you're' - short for 'you are'
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