Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Maori poem for Anzac Day
were there, lucky we have you soldiers.)
e Tama mā e. ( Good heavens boy!)
Rā whakamahara ki ngā hōia o Ahitereiria me
Aoteroa. (Anzac day - a day to commemorate those
who have served in the Nz and Australia armed
forces.)
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Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteI like that you posted a poem in Te Reo. Where did you find it? Maybe you could have a look at the size of the type and make sure all the English is smaller (or the same). Great work.
Thanks 😊
ReplyDeleteWow Ava awesome work, You have done a wonderful job of writing the poem yourself and put in so much thought. It is so much easier to read now you fixed the font. Well done!!!!
DeleteHi Ava, this is a cool poem. These words sum up the feeling of thanks for the Anzacs. Did you make it up or find it somewhere?
ReplyDeleteHi Urmi, I lookedtlooked up words on a Maori dictionary but thought of the words that would suit the poem best. Can't wait to get back to school although I'm enjoying working with my mum!
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