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Tuesday, December 8, 2020

Slow Write: May The 4th ~ Mansion In The Jungle.

 


Bright orange tiles tiling the weirdly shaped mansion roof. White gibed walls, orange installation, tiny hedges along the bottom of the plastered outdoor walls. Orange window ledges, red tinted windows rainbows reflecting fiercely off the tinted glass. Savage yellow lights blinding throughout the mansion. A large staircase leading up to a small wooden balcony looking out towards the humongous towering jungle trees. A giant serge of light falls over the gigantic orange-red castle. Through the monstrous brown trees lies 5 brightly coloured pink tiger lilies.


One sunny and bright morning I woke up to a huge bald head staring at me. I asked "WHO ARE YOU?!" the criminal replied sarcastically with "Wow!" and then I was like "Oh sorry I had a bad dream and forgot about my real life!" After that I realized oh dear this is gonna be a long LOONG day! I had to somehow manage today and try to make things right with      the criminal my dad. I race out of my bed straight to the pantry where I find cigarettes (eww), and porridge, spices, butter, bread, jam and vegemite. I decide to take the porridge and search through the freezing fridge. I find beer (eww), frozen berries, cheese, coke (eww), juice. I take out the frozen berries and start to make my breakfast.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Ava This is a amazing story my favourite part about it is how when you were shouting made them all capitals and speech marks.Great Job!!:)

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    1. Thanks for your feedback Samara.

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