The cozy cottage.
Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, December 1, 2020
Christmas Quick Write: The Cozy Cottage.
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora I'm Mikayla from Yaldhurst Model SChool.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put the background on.
this rember me of when last christmas.
To improve you could put people and spech bubble's and satna and you with you gifts.
what do you want for christmas?
From Mikayla
Hi Mikayla, I don't have any gifts yet. I want lots of things including a TV. Thanks for commenting on my blog.
DeleteHi Ava, I am Riley from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI honestly love your post, because of all the outstanding words. Next time you can talk about the things that were challenging and why you did it. Was it fun?
Riley
Hi Riley. It was really fun to make this story. Thanks for the feedback.
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