Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Steve poem
Your hair looks like a huskys fur!
You have a great sense of humor
We fit together perfectly you love tigers and my
Chinese New year animal is a tiger!
I always remember what you told me on the
couch!
I also remember when we said we were going
shopping and we always did but also got mcflurries
from McDonald's!
We are inseparable!
Love you!😘😘😍🐯🐯🐯🐶🐶🐅
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Hi again Ava,
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem again! I think its great how you have pointed out similar interests that you and Steve have in common. Have you considered doing some research on an endangered tigar and writing about it?
What a lovely dedication to Steve. I like the simile in your first line. I am wondering "What did Steve tell you on the couch?"
ReplyDeleteUrmi- that's a secret!! Kaeden and Maia can't know!!
ReplyDeleteWhat can we not know...
DeleteFine.he said " Everytime we have burgers and chips he,LL give me more."
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing. I'm sure Steve will feel very proud when he reads the poem. Thanks for putting Kaeden out of his misery. Do you think you could a poem for your brother and sister, it would be something they would treasure : >
ReplyDeleteHahaha ok
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