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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

My mum poem

Mum your lips are as shiny as a bright lightbulb
Your teeth are as white as snow
Your eyes are the most beautiful thing I've seen
Your beautiful hair is as pretty as can be
You are the best mum in the world😘
 Me and you make the perfect team! And Steve and Maia and Kaeden of course!
But mostly me, you and Steve!
You are kind and caring, sweet and thoughtful that is why your the best mum EVER!

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Ava,
    What a neat poem! I like the fact you have shown appreciation for your mum and made her feel special. Looking forward to seeing some more poems!!

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  2. Your mum will love reading the poem. It gave me warm fuzzies.
    Helpful Hint: put capital letters in the title and perhaps you could add a photo of your family : >

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