Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
My mum poem
Your teeth are as white as snow
Your eyes are the most beautiful thing I've seen
Your beautiful hair is as pretty as can be
You are the best mum in the world😘
Me and you make the perfect team! And Steve and Maia and Kaeden of course!
But mostly me, you and Steve!
You are kind and caring, sweet and thoughtful that is why your the best mum EVER!
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Kia Ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteWhat a neat poem! I like the fact you have shown appreciation for your mum and made her feel special. Looking forward to seeing some more poems!!
Your mum will love reading the poem. It gave me warm fuzzies.
ReplyDeleteHelpful Hint: put capital letters in the title and perhaps you could add a photo of your family : >