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Friday, July 24, 2020

Quick Write Magic Carpet.

Quick Write.

 Startled I jumped out of my orange bed to see Star my pet dog bouncing excitedly on my wooden floorboards. I look towards where Star is looking and I see a flying carpet. The carpet is as red as a rose, there is a golden outline and a slight tint of blue. All of my favourite colours! I decide to hop on and... WHOOSH... The magical carpet now has gold stars shimmering underneath. As I fly my ginger hair shoots out behind me and my pj's fly in the wind. Oh, no a tree how do I turn around? HELP!
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  1. AnonymousJuly 27, 2020 at 9:56 AM

    Very cool Ava, again a good job with you descriptions. I really liked the wee twist at the end about the tree. Magic carpets always remind me of the movie Aladdin, how about you?

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