I heard screeching noises then a neenaw neenaw. As I looked out the fiery window something caught me. I screamed for it to let me go.
I turned to look at it, I stared into its purple eyes. I repeated, “let me go!” Its huge silver mouth said “OK.”
Then I felt loads of air filling my lungs, I panicked. I felt my head banging on the sides of my house. I automatically put my hand to my head and felt gooey red liquid rushing for air. I saw an ambulance pull up then a fire truck.
This was so bad!
What would you do if you were in this position? |
Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, February 14, 2020
TWM term 1 writing Opps
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