Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 4, 2019
Step-Dads are awesomly easy to trick
biscuts
for the cats. But he thought that they were Chocolate drops.
He said '' Can i have one of those chocolate drops?'' I said " their not chocolate drops their cat biscuts."
He said "No surly their not." I said " actually they are chocolate drops".
Then he tried one "Eww."
"Please get me a drink of water." Me and my sister got him a drink of water.
He said you little tricksters."
True story.
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I love this story Ava! It's very well written and I love the title. I think you should write more, you've started with a true event but you could write about some made up tricks! ...you could even come up with some more tricks for Steve and then write about them!
ReplyDeleteThat's really funny story. I like how you tricked your
ReplyDeletestepdad i trick my sister all the time. I am trying to
think of something helpful but i can't you did everything
good. Cool story. P.s there are other comment's from me in some
of your other work.
Mikaela